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Old 23-11-2004, 12:00   #1

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A Poem i wrote

I was in my biology lesson today, the teacher was talking and writing notes, i copied the notes down in red n black, then half of the page was empty. So i drew a box and coloured it with red'n'black. and on the top i wrote: Rossonero, Redblack, Forza Milan, Campioni D'Italia, Campioni D'Europa.
"Be a Rossonerian, Be a Milanista, Be a CHAMPION"


Here is the poem:
Everysecond, every hour and everyday
the rossonerian flag is held high
the redblack flag will be ontop everyday
Milanistas holding the flag up high
wer it belongs and that'll happen all day
thats because the squad have always given and will always give milanistas a great day,
the rossoneri will show opponets a great game
satisfying milanistas with world class play
and they do that in both : Home and Away

If i was given more time, i woudl've wrote more

I dont think its good enough for AC Milan though.
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Old 23-11-2004, 12:14   #2

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Nice poem, I like the rhyme in the last two lines
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Old 23-11-2004, 12:20   #3

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I got the rythm only in last two lines... sorry
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Old 23-11-2004, 12:28   #4

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It's ok, told you it isnt that good
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Old 23-11-2004, 17:33   #5

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Its a very nice poem, makes me a milanista
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Old 23-11-2004, 20:11   #6

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good job....not hard to get inspiration being a Milan fan
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Old 23-11-2004, 20:14   #7
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I like it too , good job mate
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Old 24-11-2004, 06:42   #8

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Good job! There is a lot of heart and genuine love for the club in that poem It is certainly better than some of the poems in the poems thread (remember those Inter-bashing Haikus)

Hopefully you have inspired other members to write Milan poems
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Old 24-11-2004, 07:18   #9

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Thanks all, I wrote one last year, but in arabic. I'll try to translate it in English
(wonders where his last year math textbook is)
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